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3.8.06 Untitled song by ~wiccanwolfsrose:iconwiccanwolfsrose:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Song


Do you, ever look back on, the past
And wonder where you went, wrong,
Asking yourself all these, questions,
That you can’t possibly, answer alone?

Do you ,blame yourself,
For all the, worlds pain,
Do you, wish this life would, end So,
you begin , again?

I do, Every day,
Yes, I do,
It hurts me to tell you,
That I do,
Everyday, I do…

Do, people offer help you,
And you just, turn to self,
When things, are coming unglued,
All the time…?

And do you, wait for tomorrow,
Hoping, you will be proved wrong,
And maybe, things will better,
Just this time…?

I do, Every day,
Yes, I do,
It hurts me to tell you,
That I do,
Everyday, I do…

Do you…?
©2006-2010 ~wiccanwolfsrose
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Author's Comments

this is a pice which i doubt anyone wil catch the beat to unless they heard me sing it, but i felt like posting it.

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*Garnet-43 Mar 9, 2006, 4:54:27 AM
I like it. You're right about the eccentric phrasing. It doesn't detract from the piece, though, but rather adds to it. I wish I could hear you sing it!

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"And the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom." - Anais Nin
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~And-If-I-Jump Mar 9, 2006, 10:48:34 AM
Very good, I can relate to it and I don't have to know the details, which always seem to exist....

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Living life to avoid it
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~wiccanwolfsrose Mar 9, 2006, 11:25:42 AM
maybe someday

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It is okay to talk to inanimate objects...but when they start answering you, That is NOT a good sign.
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~wiccanwolfsrose Mar 9, 2006, 11:47:29 AM
ypyp
thanx

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It is okay to talk to inanimate objects...but when they start answering you, That is NOT a good sign.
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~relativestranger Mar 9, 2006, 11:48:15 AM
as garnett said i wish i could hear you sing it. Lovely piece.

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Imagine a world with no hypotheticals
(\ /)
( . .)
c('')('') This is Shadow-Bunny. Copy him into your signature to help him to beat the living dayshits outta his fatfuck brother and dominate the world!
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~wiccanwolfsrose Mar 9, 2006, 11:49:25 AM
maybe someday u will.
I wasn't sure about the piece,
but others like it.

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It is okay to talk to inanimate objects...but when they start answering you, That is NOT a good sign.
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~HeartBraden Mar 9, 2006, 6:08:11 PM
What genre is this?

I like it a lot, by the way.

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He whispers the soft reminders of a better tomorrow:
"Good night my darling; this is not the end"
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~wiccanwolfsrose Mar 9, 2006, 6:10:37 PM
genre?

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It is okay to talk to inanimate objects...but when they start answering you, That is NOT a good sign.
:iconheartbraden:
~HeartBraden Mar 9, 2006, 6:14:01 PM
Style of music

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He whispers the soft reminders of a better tomorrow:
"Good night my darling; this is not the end"
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