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In all hearts
Are hidden things,
Kept from some,
While our heart sings.

Subtle secrets,
Known to few,
Color our lives,
A brighter hue.

Secrets not hurtful,
Secrets of no shame,
Secrets which to some,
Are simply hard to claim.

Subtle Secrets,
None are wrong,
But many scare us,
For they are strong.

What girl tells her friend,
She feels for him more,
When she risks losing everything,
A friendship she does adore?

Subtle secrets,
What more is their to say,
They are with us always,
And seem to stay.

What boy tells his friend,
He likes her more than a little,
When chances are that maybe,
He’ll make their friendship brittle?

Subtle Secrets,
We all know they’re there,
The only question left,
Is should we share?

Should we tell our secrets,
Should we let them go,
And if this is to be,
How do we ever know?
©2006-2010 ~wiccanwolfsrose
:iconwiccanwolfsrose:

Author's Comments

i realize this is my 4th poem tonight.
I'm making up for being out of town for four days.
so there should be no new postings until sunday or monday.
enjoy

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:icongarnet-43:
"Should we tell our secrets,
Should we let them go,
And if this is to be,
How do we ever know?"

That's really good. Everyone has secrets. I'm sure everyone has pondered the question that you so eloquently phrased.

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"And the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom." - Anais Nin
:iconwiccanwolfsrose:
yes...
that was the point of this poem.
there r perhaps a few devaints whom know me well enough off da the get the personal jest,
but it was intended to relate to everyone as well.

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It is okay to talk to inanimate objects...but when they start answering you, That is NOT a good sign.
:iconautumtear:
i like da fourth stanza but i love da last stanza , such a great poem :D

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Time Time Time...We're not waiting,
Time Time Time ...We're no one.-AFI
:iconirishhellgirl:
its a great poem

its so simple....... but it shows the message so easily

i like it

another :+fav:

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Castro is alive? O.o
:iconrelativestranger:
I hate secrets. :( hehe just joking, love this, so eloquent and the rhythm is perfect for the whole.

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:iconwiccanwolfsrose:
thanx.
i was inspired

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It is okay to talk to inanimate objects...but when they start answering you, That is NOT a good sign.
:iconwiccanwolfsrose:
thanx

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It is okay to talk to inanimate objects...but when they start answering you, That is NOT a good sign.
:iconwiccanwolfsrose:
thanx.
glad you like it

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It is okay to talk to inanimate objects...but when they start answering you, That is NOT a good sign.
:iconirishhellgirl:
^_^

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Castro is alive? O.o

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